First Thought, Best Thought

First thought

Best thought

If what you say is true

Then why is there

Always editing to do?

Corrections to make

Cant have a spelling mistake

Punctuation must be clear

The sentence  too long

The paragraph too short

How do we use a semi-colon?

Oh this has my blood a rollin’

Trying to be descriptive

Without going overboard

Using friends like Webster and Thesaurus

 Spell Check and my best friend  backspace.

Don’t use and, and but too many times

The fragmented sentences

All those pretty red lines

Yelling  you need to revise

But when you finally have it all finished

And read it once more

DON’T FORGET to hit save

Or all that thinking and editing

Will leave you with another

First Thought



One thought on “First Thought, Best Thought

  1. I really like this one . Goes with this territory well !

    Posted by bounce51 | October 19, 2012, 7:43 pm

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